Can you please write the most romantic words, line, poem you ever read?

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I will need to write something for my wife on our wedding day. I have thinking allot. I know that I should write what I feel but I thought something could inspire me.

Best thing I ever heard was in the movie (as good as it gets) when jack nicholson said to the girl: You make me want to be a better person.


Or something like that.


Whats yours?

Thanks
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Back before the days of CDs when cars had cassette tape players I stuck a rose with a card on the steering wheel using some Scotch tape. Before that I made a recording on a cassette tape using my phone message recording machine. On the tape I basically told her how I felt about her and what she meant, (still means) to me. When she got in her car to go to work that morning she saw the rose, and read the card which also told her how I felt about her. Then at the end as a PS I advised her to play the tape in the cassette deck because I made something for her.

She read it while I watched through the door peep window and then backed out to leave and actually went down the street a piece. Then apparently she played the tape because I saw the brake lights come on and then the reverse lights after that. As for what happened after that, well, she called in sick and thats all I'm going to say further about it other than, "it was a great day after that!" :D

STR
 
The one we used

"our love is our life
our life is our love forever"
 
This is a great song, by the Band HIM- hopefully it'll give you some ideas:)

Loose You Tonight

Don't run away
Cause I can't live without you
Please stay
And I learn to love you right

I was waiting for you
Waiting for all my life
I've been crying for you
Die for you all this time
I was waiting for you
Waiting for all my life
And I'm not going to
Lose you tonight

Don't run away
I never wanted to hurt you
Please stay
And I learn to treat you right

I was waiting for you
Waiting for all my life
And I've been crying for you
Die for you all this time
I was waiting for you
Waiting for all my life
And I'm not going to
Lose you tonight

I was waiting for you
Waiting for all my life
And I've been crying for you
Die for you all this time
I was waiting for you
Waiting for all my life
And I'm not going to
Lose you tonight

I was waiting for you
Waiting for all my life

Oh, I can't live without you

And I've been crying for you
Die for you all this time

I never want adore you

I was waiting for you
Waiting for all my life
And I'm not going to
Lose you tonight

I'm going to lose you tonight

I was waiting for you
Waiting for all my life
And I've been crying for you
Die for you all this time
I was waiting for you
Waiting for all my life
And I'm going to
Lose you tonight
---HIM
 
In one of the most recent episodes of Grey's Anatomy, one of the male characters recited his vows for the nurses as he was operating (at their request). It was wonderful. Let me see if I can find it.
 
Found it !!!!

"I could promise to hold you, and to cherish you, I could promise to be there in sickness and in health. I could say till death do us part. But I won't. Those vows are for optimistic couples, the ones full of hope. And I do not stand here, on my wedding day, optimistic, or full of hope. I am not optimistic, I am not hopeful, I am sure. I am steady. So this, I am sure, you are my partner, my lover, my very best friend. My heart, my heart beats for you. And on this day, the day of our wedding, I promise you this. I promise you to lay my heart in the palm of your hands. I promise you, me."
 
All that I am and all that I have, I offer to you in love and in joy.
From this day forward I will love and comfort you, hold you close,
prize you above all others,
and remain faithful to you all the days of our lives.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Because of you, I laugh, I smile, I dare to dream again.
I look forward with great joy to spending the rest of my
life with you, caring for you, nurturing you, being there for you in all life
has for us, and I vow to be true and faithful for as long
as we both shall live.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I commit myself to years of growth and sharing as
I encourage you to move in new direction.
I will strive to achieve my potential as God's creature
and will celebrate your progress toward the same goal.
I give myself as I am and as I will be, and I do it for all of life.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I used to be afraid of falling in love, of giving my heart away.
How could I trust a (man/woman) to love me,
to give to me all that I wanted to give to (him/her)?
(Name), when I met you, I realized how much we could share together.
You have renewed my life:
Today I join that life with yours.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I affirm the special bond and unique relationship that exists between us, and promise to keep it always alive.

I promise to love you, comfort and encourage you, be open and honest with you, and stay with you as long as we both shall live.

I promise before God and these witnesses to be your loving and faithful (husband/wife) till death do us part.

I promise to love, respect and honor you, sharing your plans and interests, ideals and emotions, through all the trials and tribulations of life, as well as the joyous times, caring for you in lifelong commitment.

I promise to be your confidante, always ready to share your hopes, dreams and secrets

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
hi peeps i'm really new at the cool bladefourums thing i heard abut it after my dad was dicussing a conversation about it and stuff--just lettin you know i'm a little biggea on poems~love em'~ i wrote like 10!
 
I love that line in 'Scrubs'

'I've made many mistakes in my life. But you cancel them all out because each of those mistakes has led me to you'

....sniff...now I got something in my eye....gotta go....waaaaa
 
Sometimes the most romatic words are simplest, most honest and most sincere.
Zz Top - I Thank You Lyrics

You didn't have to love me like you did
But you did, but you did.
And I thank you.
You didn't have to love me like you did
But you did, but you did.
And I thank you.
But You Took Your Love To Someone Else
I wouldn't know what it meant to be loved to death

You made me feel like i've never felt
Kisses so good I had to holler for help
You didn't have to squeeze it but you did
But you did but you did
And I thank you.
You didn't have to hold it but you did
But you did but you did
And I thank you.

Every day was something new,
You put on your bag and your fine to-do
You got me trying new things too
Just so I can keep up with you.

You didn't have to shake it but you did
But you did but you did
And I thank you.
You didn't have to make it like you did
But you did but you did
And I thank you.

All my life i've been shortchanged
Without your love baby it's a crying shame
But now I know what the fellas talking about
Hear me say that they been turned out
I want to thank you
I want to thank you
I want to thank you
Yes, I want to thank you
.
I also find Sarah Mclaughlin's writing very...... gushy.... ;)

Listen as the wind blows
From across the great divide
Voices trapped in yearning
Memories trapped in time
The night is my companion
And solitude my guide
Would I spend forever here
And not be satisfied
And I would be the one
To hold you down
Kiss you so hard
Ill take your breath away
And after Id wipe away the tears
Just close your eyes dear
Through this world Ive stumbled
So many times betrayed
Trying to find an honest word
To find the truth enslaved
Oh you speak to me in riddles and
You speak to me in rhymes
My body aches to bre
athe your breath
You words keep me alive
And I would be the one
To hold you down
Kiss you so hard
Ill take your breath away
And after Id wipe away the tears
Just close your eyes dear
Into this night I wander
Its morning that I dread
Another day of knowing of
The path I fear to tread
Oh into the sea of waking dreams
I follow without pride
Nothing stands between us here
And I wont be denied
And I would be the one
To hold you down
Kiss you so hard
Ill take your breath away
And after Id wipe away the tears
Just close your eyes dear
 
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IMO, much better and more honest would be something like the following:

Dear soon to be future wife I hereby pledge to:

Not channel surf every 2 seconds with the remote;
More or less pick up my clothes from the floor;
Wipe my feet before coming in the door;
Give a hand with the dishes, cleaning or house chores;
Never tell you you look fat, even if you do;
If I'm caught looking at another woman say, " She can't hold a candle to you";
Not spend money on useless toys only without consulting you first;

You get he idea, plus it would be funny as hell.
 
How about something like; "When I pee, I promise to lift the seat, and put it back down when I'm done"?...That's what every woman wants.:D.:D.
 
There's a song that's a few hundred years old ,a duet, but I can only remember a few words . He says "If you love me I'll send you roses" and she responds " If you send them , I'll take your roses "
 
My love for you is like
an itch I can't scratch.
And forever more,
I'll B Scratching
And you'll B Itching.​

:D
 
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