Forge Poetry, a new genre?

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Poeta Amentes

Power, smooth and sudden
My forge white-hot with coal
Hammer blows dull and leaden
Molding steel to soothe my soul

Impish potter to the metallic world
Like clay on my anvil a blade is turned
Nothing is safe from this scavenger girl
Old or new, to the forge deferred

-Haley Bell
 
Not quite the same, but ...

The Anvil

England's on the anvil -- hear the hammers ring --
Clanging from the Severn to the Tyne!
Never was a blacksmith like our Norman King --
England's being hammered, hammered, hammered into line.

England's on the anvil! Heavy are the blows!
(But the work will be a marvel when it's done.)
Little bits of Kingdoms cannot stand against their foes.
England's being hammered, hammered, hammered into one!

There shall be one people -- it shall serve one Lord --
(Neither Priest nor Baron shall escape!)
It shall have one speech and law, soul and strength and sword.
England's being hammered, hammered, hammered into shape!

-- Rudyard Kipling
 
Ah, the classics, like fresh air to the soul, or a new belt on the sander? Makes me happy anyway...
 
Haley, I haven't had a chance to welcome you here. Glad to have you on board. The poetry was nice. The gentler touch will be appreciated on this forum. Might make some of us clean up our acts.
Stacy
 
The smithy is quiet, cold, and dark - There is no life here

The smith enters ,and life returns
The spark is struck
The forge awakes

The coals smoke, the bellows he pumps
The fire returns from its sleep
Its life and his entwined

The iron and his hand, both hard and worn.
With the hammer they find purpose and joy
The dance begins

Like two old friends, oft together
They seem to know
The others unspoken thought

Within the iron’s red glow
And with each hammer fall
Their souls together are wrought

The work silently flows, amid the ringing
From mind to arm
The time passes all to quickly

The bellows are still
The embers have died
Awaiting the smiths return

The smithy is quiet, cold, and dark - There is no life here

Stacy E. Apelt, FSA,Scot
 
Well said...well written.:thumbup:

Hmmm, maybe if we got enough poetic smithys together we could publish something.
 
There have been quite a few poems posted over the years by some smiths here that would surprise you. Some deep and soulful thoughts about the embers, the forge, and fire.
I'll have to do some searches and see if I can pull some back up.

Hey guys (and gals) if you have any of those poems bookmarked, put them on this thread. Haley may be on to something.
Stacy

My all time favorite is still Longfellow:
The Village Blacksmith

Under a spreading chestnut-tree
The village smithy stands;
The smith, a mighty man is he,
With large and sinewy hands;
And the muscles of his brawny arms
Are strong as iron bands.

His hair is crisp, and black, and long;
His face is like the tan;
His brow is wet with honest sweat,
He earns whate’er he can,
And looks the whole world in the face,
For he owes not any man.

Week in, week out, from morn till night,
You can hear his bellows blow;
You can hear him swing his heavy sledge,
With measured beat and slow,
Like a sexton ringing the village bell,
When the evening sun is low.

And children coming home from school
Look in at the open door;
They love to see the flaming forge,
And hear the bellows roar,
And catch the burning sparks that fly
Like chaff from a threshing-floor.

He goes on Sunday to the church,
And sits among his boys;
He hears the parson pray and preach,
He hears his daughter’s voice
Singing in the village choir,
And it makes his heart rejoice.

It sounds to him like her mother’s voice
Singing in Paradise!
He needs must think of her once more,
How in the grave she lies;
And with his hard, rough hand he wipes
A tear out of his eyes.

Toiling,—rejoicing,—sorrowing,
Onward through life he goes;
Each morning sees some task begin,
Each evening sees it close;
Something attempted, something done,
Has earned a night’s repose.

Thanks, thanks to thee, my worthy friend.
For the lesson thou hast taught!
Thus at the flaming forge of life
Our fortunes must be wrought;
Thus on its sounding anvil shaped
Each burning deed and thought.

Henry Wadsworth Longfellow (1807-1882)
 
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