Looks good. Just my 2 cents.
1 small SPF cream .....suggest a hat. What about a small Bic lighter? Fire Tinder?
4 boxes of matches ....... with firesteel & tinder and Bic, I would opt for a single box.
Something to touch the edge up? Arakansas stone maybe?
I also like my mil poncho ..... in a pinch I can make a tent and it can attach on the outside. Great when it rains as well and you are mobile.
Agree that paracord works great ...can even remove inners for fishing line so yes, consider a fishing kit.
Nalgene bottle ....... I would loose this one and get a S/S one I can cook in with a GSI cup ...I use a Klean Kanteen ..... attached outside if possible.
Maybe 2-3 days supply of rations ...Datrex or Mainstay? Some high GI sweets in a sealed packet for a quick energy boost.
I like to have a small bottle of water purification drops at hand if I am mobile and cannot boil water. Tablets also work fine so you are covered.
I also like my Shemag .....scarf when cold and shade when hot. Great to lift hot pots off the fire.
I would loose plastic plate/mug and get a GSI cup (as for Klean Kanteen above and a Ti plate (small)
Compass ...I echo ...one good one is better than 3 small ones. I also suggest a map.
I have found lightstick just about useless and would dump them and add more spare batteries. Lithium AA has a long life on the shelf and a good run time.
On cutlery ...I would start with a small knife (ala Izula/Rc-3) and add a bigger one RC-6 or so to the pack for heavy work. How about a Ti spork for eating?
And once this is sorted ....practice the skills to use all of the items. I have been amazed at how some stuff works beyond what is expected and others fail. My biggest failure to date must have been light stick. Bulky, low light output and hard to dispose off in the bush ...AA LED light works better. I have found the Zebralights work great as they can double as a headlight ...handy for when light fails and camp is not done yet

Have a look at Streamlight Sidewinder .....great kit and tough. Mine travels everywhere in my bag.
OK, I am in Africa so my kit is more savanah/arid desert ...... but hey, I should go and unpack my stuff and rethink some
Regards from Africa
Aubrey