There are dozens of acidic "wipes" you can try.Lemon juice,white vinegar,ammonia,sweat,urine (yes),liver of sulpher,FC,etc.The preferred Japanese solutions are 1 pint ammonia plus 1 tablespoon of salt;and liver of sulpher.Immerse in a hot solution and keep swishing the mokume around.Rinse every 5 minutes.It can take 30 to 60 minutes to get a good patina.Another technique is to "smoke" the mokume.Put the etchant in a large jar or plastic pail.Suspend the mokume over it and let it "develop".You can get a month worth of age patina in twenty or thirty minutes.Liver of sulpher can make some nice colors on mokume.
Any patina you make will rub off with buffing/cleaning.A permanent deep etch,like on damascus,can be gained with FC,or aqua regia.The trick is to rinse and check often.Really unusual 3D effects can be gained with a very deep etch.
As in any etching the metal should be sanded to 400,and absolutely clean and oil free.
Mirror polish is not the best surface for mokume.The reflections hide the pattern.
I am into the final stages of a san mai wakazashi and tanto with all mokume hardware.When done,I'll post photos.
Stacy