New Project Seeking Feedback

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Good morning/afternoon everyone! I'm new to the forums but I'm looking to get some feedback for a project I've been working on. Here's a link: http://tinyurl.com/pdrosjk for it. It's a kickstarter project, but I'm not looking for any pledges, just feedback on how to make it even better. What would you add or change? Thanks much in advance for any responses.