Website looks great!

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dwenslen

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Just checked out the website and I see it got another facelift!
I looks cool, the flames looked good, but this background is more businesslike, sinister even...
good job web guy.
cheers,
Derek
 
A suggestion.I`d like to see the price of the knives with the pictures.It`s kind of a pain to have to go to another page to find out what they cost.My.02
 
I'd like to see topless (female) knife models.
("...and here we have 'Candy' modeling a WB....")
I'm sure there are some strippers out there that need a day job!

I hope my wife does not see this!
cheers,
Derek
 
Hey web-guy, the new site looks great except that with the font you are using, the "Faq's" now looks like it has been renamed to "Fag's":)

Hugh
 
Uh, Strider Web Guy, I think "consealable" is spelled concealable, its on the different types of knives. Sorry thats what happens when you have an English teacher for a mother.

Thanks,
Reed
 
or perhaps it was a pun on "SEAL"????
that's what I was thinking....
or that's a good excuse, anyway.
cheers,
Derek
 
Yep, I agree with dwenslen completely, the new look does look a lot more businesslike, and a lot better overall, great job. Great animations on the Main Page too.

However, since Reed brought up the topic of spelling, I did notice a few minor typo's, small enough to go unnoticed unless you're a language-nerd like yours truly :D ... This is not meant as criticism or whining, but to aid you in professionalising the site even further. Should you think I am whining however, read no further and delete this post. In case you should care (I'm not saying you should though, that's up to you...), here they are:

- On the Main Page, a spacing is lacking between 'extreme' and 'and'.
- On the Main Page, perhaps it should be 'Re Wrap', rather than 'Re Rap'.

- Another spacing is missing in the Model BT description, between 'under' and 'hardcore'.
- In the Model AD description, the singular 'allows' refers to the plural 'ridges', hence 'allow' is probably the better choice.
- In the Tiger description, 'available' is mistyped.
- On the detailed picture of the BT you might want to change 'serrated' to 'serrations', and the grammar of the last sentence there doesn't quite work.

- Another spacing is missing on the Specs Page, between 'knife' and 'applicable'.

- On the FAQ's Page, you might want to put 'and' between 'pricing' and 'delivery', if I understand it correctly.
- On the FAQ's page, in the serrated blades question, 'Strider' is mistyped.

- A few case inconsistencies: on the Specs Page, I read both 'Strider Knives' and 'Strider knives', and in the descriptions 'Green Cord Wrap' and 'green cord warp'.

Use it if you want to, otherwise dismiss. Looking forward to the new pics. Good luck.
 
I am glad you guys are thinking like I am with the knife model's I think that will be a great idea. I will ask my girlfriend to get a bunch of her friends together and put on some some extra small Strider shirts and we will see what happens. What about a calendar too? John over at SOE pointed out the FAQ thing too. I will fix that today!!! And for the consealable oops. That will change too the spell checker had the weekend off. But she is working again and will be fixed tonight too.

Semper Fi
Mike
 
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