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atakach

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in kinda new to this whole internet thing and have started a web page for my work. just wondering if anyone could give some constructive critism, on how to improve it. i know the pics are not very good, but ive been reaserching and have learned a better way to take the pics.(there all sold anyway but i am taking orders).any advice would be appreciated.

thank you.
 
The web site looks OK. Of the pictures I saw, most were acceptable. The one of you at the anvil needs better lighting.
The thing I noticed was the spelling of several words, such as "fuel, liner, handle, running, don't". While the meaning was clear, the spelling errors make the site seem less professional. Use a spell checker and polish it up.
The knifes are nice, and I like your damascus. Keep at it.
Chip Kunkle
 
I started to list all the other spelling and grammatical errors that Chip had missed, but after the second page I was already at 10 and decided not to. The spelling errors and errors in grammar make you APPEAR uneducated. I am NOT saying that you are, but that is how it makes it seem. If you are going to take the time to build a website it should make you appear as proffessional as possible. That is what the customer wants, and what will make the buyer more confident in your work. Have someone sit down and go through your site line by line.
Sorry to be so critical, but anything less would have been dishonest.
Good Luck,:thumbup:
Matt Doyle
 
thanks for the defense karl. j/k
i want the criticism so dont worry about fellings i leave them at home with my nice cloths. i take it with a grain of salt and like the corrective help.

thank you

www.takachforge.com
 
Can you think of a good excuse to spam all over the forums? How about a bad excuse?
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