This is just my two cents, and remember that as far as knifemaking goes, I'm the last person you should listen to.
But I do have a degree in design, and I also am a very big kitchen knife fan, so it's those two areas where my thoughts are coming from.
First - the kitchen.
I think the "pointy" profile of the blade is great for kitchen work. Your dad is going to get a lot of use out of the first inch of that blade especially for basic utility tasks.
The pronounced guard you've drawn is a different issue. I think it might cause a little more difficulty using the knife on a cutting board or when the knife is used for peeling and deep cutting. Bringing it back to in-line with the edge is preferred for me. But even if you brought it back to in-line with the edge, the thickness there still has pros and cons. Here's a picture of a Wustoff with an integral guard, so you'll know what I'm talking about:
The pro is that it acts like a finger guard, so there's no accidentally notching your fingers when you get down to business. Another pro is that it provides a nice little 'stop" when you put the knife in your block. But this feature also has its drawbacks. it can stop you dead in your tracks when you're cutting deep into a melon or when you are peeling and kind of turns a 4" blade into a 3" blade because you never want use that last inch because you don't want the guard or the handle to get in your way.
All that said, I prefer a design used in "eastern" knives where not even the handle comes up to the heel of the blade. It's all free of anything, no guard no nothing. Here's an example of the basic design used by Shun:
This knife allows full use of every milimeter of the blade edge.
Keep in mind that I know several people who can't stand my eastern blades. So all of this might be just me.
Second - the design.
The proflie of the handle is very traditional, and it's traditional because it WORKS. The human hand knows exactly where to go on this handle. both the pinky and the forefinger have a place to call home (which tells your brain exactly how far the knife is sticking out). This design is also often used with "flats" on the sides, which is a feature I love in a kitchen knife. This tells your brain, in a very physical way exactly which direction the blade is pointed. In the kitchen, the knife is an extension of the hand and your mind is on several things at once. This handle design is so familiar that it will instantly become second nature to use.
BUT - (you knew there would be a 'but' didn't you?) It's very traditional. This is where the artist in me kind of takes over. Traditional can be good, but it can almost look "store bought".
If you're going to spend a lot of time making a knife for your father, you might consider putting a little bit more personality into this aspect. Yes, you can definitely jazz it up with the right materials and that might be enough. But since we're only talking about profile at this point, I wonder if you might make a slight adjustment or two to let a little bit more personality show up.
The good part of designing on paper first is that you can always go back to the traditional profile if your other, more unique designs aren't working out.