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Very impressive Ryan! I really enjoyed that.
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Paul,
It is one of the cheap lamps you can get at any store: Shopko, Walmart etc... with the cheap plastic cover over the felxible part, I just took it apart and drilled a hole through my Platen attachment. I cut the plug off and slid the cord through the hole then attached an aftermarket Plug. Hope this makes sense.
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I think he did a great job. I would love to hear your thoughts.
Ryan
Video is a pretty important aspect of marketing now.
I've got nothing, so it's automatically better than mine.
I watched it a couple of times.
Well, you can't please everyone, and it's easy for me to nitpick.
Let me put some stuff out there
It's on Vimo and I have turned off HD, but it still loads super slow for me.
On Youtube I know how to change setting way down so I can have it load quickly.
Within the first few seconds it has a feel VERY similar to that guy in New York / Brooklyn
and maybe you want to differentiate yourself from that.
Within the first 30 seconds there is your voice over and music at the same time.
It makes is really hard for me to understand you.
I'm sure people with worse hearing have more trouble.
Same at 3:30 -4:30 good nostalgia story but music and voice over at the same time.
4:22 I hear "messing with you " as an echo
If that's your video guy talking to you, I would cut out his voice in that clip and just keep yours.
Keep the illusion that we are there listening to you.
Some here like that music.
I don't completely hate it, but I don't really care for it.
It's a Snody-ism I want to watch interesting videos, but the music has the ability to drive me away from them.
No matter what music you use you will offend somebody.
Don't limit who will be attacted to your knives to those that have the same musical tastes as you do.
I know that the framing, zoom and focus changing is supposed to be artistic, I don't care for that.
No practical purpose...
The video shots and cuts are already very short and quickly paced.
I'd rather just see what you are doing in sharp focus.
Like when you are grinding, the workpiece is not always focused and that is where you want to draw the viewers attention to.
Why some grinding with a proper respirator and some with the paper mask?
If this is a sales tool, Wiping on your shirt ?
Not professional & some women or others will just HATE that .
Pat's right, your vise really rattles.
7:12
Check the spelling and grammar on that text.
Withstood instead of stood?
"Lossing" ? Probably need to lose an "s"
Check the last sentence - it's just awkward somehow.
It's a sentence fragment and maybe person or tense, or possessives change or something ?
instead of "A tool"
maybe use "It is a tool that has...."
Was there at least one thing you DID like? It would have been nice to mention at least one nice thing considering the amount of nit picking going on here.
If I can say just one thing......of all the complaints you had with it, really....the shirt wiping? If this video was supposed to be simply a look into what goes on in Ryan's shop then let's be real. We all wipe off grit, dust, grime, grease, oil, etc on our shop clothes. What do you want him to do, get out some sanitary wipes with his grimy black crusted hands? C'mon numbers, it's a shop video. Anyone who works in a shop making knives has wiped stuff off on his clothes. You may disagree with me, but personally I don't think that qualifies as a shop faux pas. You really went all out trying to tear this apart.
I would love to hear your thoughts.
Ryan
My experience is ladies dig it when it someone elses man, and Hate it when it is theirs... Sales to ladies is up :thumbup:The ladies control more than half the money in the world, why offend them if you don't have to?
Ryan makes nice knives, good design, nice flow.
I think that part should have the greatest emphasis.
Would have made me feel goods Feel Good!I could have just said "nice video" but how would that have helped ?
12345... I appreciate you taking the time to watch the video and critique the style, content and "Marketability" This is not a marketing video, I agree this would not make everyone say "Damn where Can I get one of those knives". A friend asked it he could take some time in my shop and put a little video together. He did not have "Hours" of footage, he used what he had. The last thing I wanted was a video that said I am Ryan Weeks Buy my knives, cause they rock. He just wanted to give people a quick look into my shop.
I like the video especially from someone that has no knife making experience, to show an interest in what I do. He didn't have the Audio plug pushed all the way in during the part where I told the folding knife story, it was in Mono. He was upset about it, but this was just for fun.