Again I can't state it enough that I appreciate all of the comments. I have starting shaping out my next two blanks and I will try and address as many issues / critiques as I can in this post.
1. File marks left on - This should be an issue, because I'm not using files from here on out and will be ordering proper annealed steel from here on out.
2. Plunge lines and grinding - No more free hand, I'm going to try a more mechanical process (jigs) to help get a nice full flat grind, hopefully it will assist in the overall appearance and eliminate the newb convexing issues.
3. Rounded broomstick type butt - I have redrawn a more squared off butt, more like a strider (see new drawing below).
4. Pin blow outs on the slabs - I think the best way for me to handle this issue is to drill the hole with a smaller bit and then go to the 1/8 bit and drill from the finish side to the epoxy on side.
5. Squaring up the spine - I think this was an issue using too much slack, I'm going to try and avoid convexing and go with more flat. Running the spine vertical while finishing sounds like a good idea and should also clear up any rounding issues that may occur.
6. Pin spacing - A lot of people felt the pins were too far spaced and this shouldn't be a problem on the next one, I have moved the pins more into the center on my redraw.
7. Thick slabs - I was planning on going with a thinner piece of ironwood for the next ones, starting with a 1/4" rather that a 3/8" slab.
8. Finger slippage - I have increase the choil area to create a more defined area and provide a more secure grip.
9. Added a 1/4 hole to provide a lanyard tube, this should help with the balance. I still have to pick up the tubing, so I'm not 100% on the 1/4" hole until I get the material.
All the sheathing tips and trick have been great, I will have to look into the gumming the edges. There is still a lot to learn working with leather, but I will strive to get better and do the best that I can.
I have already started profiling out 2 more blanks based on everyones input. I should finish shaping them up tonight and then work on my jigs before I start on the grinding.