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Pay special attention to the edge grind and see that it is smooth and consistent. Many new makers make the edge too thick and don't carry the grind far enough up the blade. This is often referred to as the "Sharpened piece of steel" look. Sand the entire blade until the edge is getting close to sharp, and then add the final edge bevel. This will assure a flat and shiny main bevel, and a wicked sharp edge.
Ryan and geek ( and others) -
I know it seems like a kind offer, but the rules prohibit posting photos for a registered user . Either they will have to host the photos somewhere and post a link, or upgrade to a basic membership. Most of us have done it at one time, but we shouldn't.