Don't worry about checking it just yet, brother. I think it's really cool how you've taken this entrepreneurial initiative. There are small typos and grammatical issues throughout, but nothing shocking. What you need is a professional editor to do a run-through and tidy things up a bit. I'm an editor and speechwriter for the Ministry of Foreign Affairs in Taiwan, and was managing editor of the country's largest English-language newspaper for several years. If it's not too intrusive, I'd be happy to go through everything for you. It would be nice to stray from politics for a while anyway. If that sounds OK to you, I'll get right on it.
