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Looks very nice, clean and not jam packed is good. Just a few tips or my two cents how ever you want to take it :D. Might try messing with the colors a bit, get them to work better together. Like maybe change the brown to a gray and change the table border to something similar. Also one thing i think would help is to punch up your top logo a bit, the one that says Tortorichknivesandhawks.com. The red is ok but it feals out of place as it is bright. If you can put a picture in it's place that would work great then you can use something like photoshop to design something that really pops. this is just what i have found to work niceley. o and one more thing i have found to help is this. if your website address is long and made up of many words then to help people remember it you Caps every first letter of the word in the address and also shrink down the .com a little smaller then the rest of the address. example
TortorichKnivesAndHawks.com

I have found it makes it easy to read and remember as well as by shrinking the .com it gives you more space to make the rest of the address larger. It just kinda jazzes it up and makes it look sweet :D

just some ideas, if you need any help let me know and i would be more then willing to lend a hand as I'm always tweaking my site
 
but i've been a print/package designer since '94, that being said...

THE GOOD: actually your site functions better and easier than most and looks like you do beautiful work in the blade department:D

THE STUFF THAT NEEDS WORK: any critique would be purely cosmetic, as has been said. Since your doing this yourself :thumbup: i'll keep it realistic:D
A) The colors could work a bit better
B) Use your actual logo in the corner, easier to manipulate it to work with the background (color Bars) and the picture may confuse some as its upside down.
C) Consistency in font usage, dont use too many different type faces, i counted 4?
D) The red is quite shocking, and on the blue background can be a little hard to look at.
E) Overall Utilize the space a little more efficiently (Between The Section Links on the left side (a little more space) and maybe re-space some of the photos elsewhere

once again these were meant to be helpful
good luck
ivan
 
Thanks a lot for your comments and suggestions. I will try to implement some of them soon. Unfortunately, I am limited in what I can change because this site builder program uses templates that sets the spacing among other things.. In retrospect my URL is probably too long but I am stuck with it now.. I am constantly updating the site and you should notice a change in the next week or so when I get time. Thanks again for the constructive criticism and helpful suggestions.
 
Thanks for the imput, I have implemented as many changes as possible.. Thanks again for the help.
 
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