School On Other Planets

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In the Milky Way Galaxy there is another planet with humanoid type beings, who also send their children to school. This is a slice of life from that planet.

There was a little boy named XV who liked to hit other children. When the other children expressed pain after being struck, or pushed, or knocked down, there was no expression on the face of XV, except for perhaps excitement. Empathy is the word I'm looking for to translate this alien experience- there was no empathy for another's pain in the little boy.

The parents of A,B, and C in the small 'neighborhood' where this is taking place, (on this planet there are not actual neighborhoods but this is as close a translation to our language and concepts as I can come) had watched XV carefully for several years. XV sometimes came to their home to play with A, B, and C. One year XV slammed a tritium gate from an interlocker against a bulkhead of a grain unit, again and again, aganst the skull of little B, then only 3 earth years of age. Little B was not quite the same afterwards. The Parents of XV were told of this, but thought it was an accident. It was an accident to them even though the distance of the action was about 13 inches from XV's face from B, but he did not 'see' little B.

Years went by and the parents of A,B,and C wondered how XV would do. Perhaps he would grow out of this violence.

One day though, the important day from whence this interstellar tale derives, XV took a metal pipe like one of our baseball bats, and struck A in the head, missing his vision unit (eye) by about a 1/16 of an inch, while at school. The Teacher interogated the victim of the incident, A, and decided XV had not meant to swing the bar, and this was an accident.

The parents of A,B, and C were alarmed. The actions of XV had not stopped with age; they were continueing and growing in proportion. The Teacher was protective of XV and refused to see anything but accidents. The Parents of A,B, and C talked to all the other parents in the school and found similar stories about their own children, accidents from XV, and something else. ON Earth when humans are sad or fearful they sometimes cry. On this planet they cry too, but it is in the form of a kind of substance that to us would look like dust. Their version of 'dust up', as you might imagine, is much different from ours, but the same thing is happening; people are sad or fearful or both.

It turns out the teacher had made every last student cry dust, and half the children had been removed from the school because of this dust up. The parents did not want their children to be in fear of the Teacher, and they did not want their children to be hurt by an accident from XV. As the Parents of A,B and C looked into this further, they realized their own children had been made to suffer also.

The little community where this took place, developed an opinion of the father of A,B and C, and the opinion was not good. You see, the Father was causing all this problem. Little XV was a nice unit, and if the father said these were not accidents, but deliberate, it meant XV was a monster. The father said that it would be best to confront and help XV now as a child, and not later as a young man of 20, where it was doubtful he would listen or be approachable any longer. Every parent who'd removed their children had a story about XV hurting their children, and in every case it was an accident. None the less, it was not the Teacher who was pressuring and making dust from the children, and not XV who hurt others; but it was the father of A, B, and C who caused this needless commotion.

The next solar pattern there will be only one family in the little school house unless something has changed. All the families but one will remove their children. The father of A, B, and C is not looking for bad units or good units, but wants behavior to change. He will have to face many authorities as he attempts to communicate this novel concept. Meanwhile, as is so often the case on this alien planet, many people misunderstand the father, and belittle or isolate his actions to make them meaningless.

But there is a bright spot. In the middle of this dark, a family from the natives of the original 'rock crushers', a kind of remnant from a past age on the planet where hunter gatherers, or those most anagolous to them in our terms, called the father to talk to him. They had a wonderful grandaughter who was very kind, the apple (or Xionate) of their eye, and they did not want any harm to come to her. Rock Crushers do not normally call the people from which the father of A, B, and C come from, because there is a division of culture and history from their respective peoples. Sponge Sitters, they are called. Anyway, the Sponge Sitter, the father was glad in his heart the Rockcrusher family called him. It turns out they knew everything he knew, about the teacher and the dangerous and troubled child, XV. They would join the approach to the authorities of the Sponge Sitter with the father. It turns out the father, who is very strange to most people, was understood by these Rockcrushers to be a good man, and one worth standing with.
"It's going to be alright." the grandmother Rockcrusher told the father, "Don't be so excited, calm down."
The Rockcrusher family could see past the cultural divide and understood the father had moments of great excitability.


Who knows where the little drama will go, on this distant planet so removed from our own, where groups of people never misunderstand an individual and isolate him, and identify those needing help early and prevent tragedy later on in life? Please have a moment of compassion for these long lost star cousins of ours, who have a difficult road to travel in their troubled world.


munk
 
Im certain there is something less than fictional going on, but it is a very fine piece of writing.
 
My best wishes and support go out to the father of A, B, and C. I'm glad he's not alone in this tale.

Chris
 
Why, thank you, Nam. Though communication to the Father of A,B, and C is sometimes difficult, as he is a fussy and fretting individual, I'll try to translate this to him. He left a sending unit while he was here. He approved of the armaments of the munk Compound, btw, and thought our projectile weapons quaint but deadly. He was particularly fascinated by the khukuri, and took one back to his planet. I was so touched by his attention to my little sphere of influence, that I sent him back armed with a .41 Ruger Redhawk


munk
 
XV will eventually be reduced to x, which is analogous to a butt whoopin', or perhaps a drug OD, or perhaps the result of an "accident" from another xv type, in our world. Being reduced to x is usually permanent.

Someone in our world once said,"he that spareth the rod, hateth his child."

I don't know if that would translate.

prayers can reach very far though.

I'm glad that A,B, and C have a loving father.

Tom
 
It would be good if the V for violence were removed from X.
The pattern is calculatedly hurting each of his peers and maintaining an alibi; he was looking away, they were all in a crowd, didn't see, etc etc...

The lack of emotion is frightening. The denial by the aliens fascinating. The pipe was about 18" (earth measure) long. How could one swing a pipe that short and not know who was in the circumfrance of the swing? Yet the aliens believed this story.


munk
 
I predict as the story progresses, little XV will continue to hurt others and do bad things, and the parents will continue to deny anything's wrong, because that would reflect on them.

Eventually he will steal a car, commit a robbery or rape a girl, none of which will be his fault, because he was influenced by others, by TV, etc. There will always be an out for little XV until he's locked up, by which time an innocent person may also no longer have a future.

SInce I like nice stories, not ugly reality, I sure hope the writer keeps A,B & C safe and away from the little detached psychopath.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully, they'll move to another planet.


Mike
 
...more grim news: I let the father take some video games back with him to his planet. When XV was visiting, (before all this happened) he delighted in a) running over pedestrians in a race game or a construction game, and b) shooting his own men in a combat game, particularly happy to see the blood.

A Rockcrusher in the area will not let his dog unit to go over to XV's house because he saw what XV did with him previously.
A Spongesitter's dog unit growled at XV in the little store, because XV is the only kid in the area who hurts the dog.

And everyone has a story of their kid being hurt through an accident of XV.
It is unfortunate, but growing up in a rural area of the planet, XV has learned how to shoot ray weapons.
He's been observed cocking his hand like a raygun and one after another shooting the entire class dead.


munk
 
Good Lord, Munk. I hope that XV finds help (or the others find relief from him) before that hand is replaced by the real thing.

Smoke,

Chris
 
I guess I was too subtle. I should have said, "he will become just an EX someday..."

It sounds too much like our planet for comfort.


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What ship will bear us away from hence, when all of Middle Earth is become as Numenor?

Where is Elendil, ready to bear away the faithful from the doom to come?

How shall we stand, and reap the bitter harvest of the culture we have sown?

How will I bear it, when the Orcs come for my wife and children, and my arms finally fail, or age and infirmity make me unable to even strike a blow?

If I had not a faith that reaches beyond the circles of the world, I would even now rather depart this life, than see the final undoing of the West.

Since I have received such a gift, I must remain, stand, and drink the cup that is poured for me.

After that bitter draught comes the joy that is unspeakable, and full of glory, where moth and rust do not destroy, and thief does not break in and steal.

Or Rape.

Or kill.



I dread that cup, nonetheless.


Tom
 
The world is the world, and we deal with it. Hang in, Tom, I've always read your words eagerly.



munk
 
You got that right.

And we get to laugh every once in awhile too, and there are friends.



munk
 
well, i was catholic schooled and i gotta ask if these aliens believe in any sort of higher entity because that story, though interesting, is bull$#!+. that's how pissed i am, i've never cursed on a forum before. i remember when if you spilled your milk you'd get yelled at. accident or not, a simple yelling at for what you do will make you more careful and considerate. beyond that, a good whippin might open your eyes to what pain is like. at the very least it will instill fear. many only behave well not for benevolence toward their fellow man but only to avoid punishments like fines, prison, or in some cases hell. believers in hell are generally well behaved anyway so that's pretty rare. if you're still a scumbag you don't really believe in hell.

what does this alien kid have in the way of role models? what are his progenitor units like? when i was little and saw lois lane interview superman on her balcony and he said "i'm here for truth, justice, and the american way...i never lie, lois." that struck little me and i tried really hard to live up to that. who do kids have now? where's the paradigmatic ideal to strive for?

i'm a big boy and i sure wouldn't wanna get hit the way A did.
 
There's much I haven't said. A was XV's best friend. It doesn't matter, does it, when you're more interested in causing pain, you don't care to whom?

The background is not sufficient to account for XV. He has had punishment dealt out inconsistantly- a real spanking for trivial offenses and nothing for major. I'll stop there.

The aliens saw all this coming and hoped they were wrong. They really prayed they were wrong.



munk
 
Tom, you've been like a rock I can count on. We've had these conversations about all aspects of life, and you've been there, and the two of us have seen the other as we truly are many times.



munk
 
Munk,
You write the coolest things. I have no writing ability or imagination towards writing so it is nice to see the writings of someone that does. Either that or you get some far out guests at the compound!:D ;)
The problem is now I need to know how this turns out. Tell us the rest of the story Uncle Munk.:thumbup:
 
I will. The school meetings start next week. It might be many years before we see where XV goes.
I'm afraid XV is going to hurt some of the alien children in the neighborhood before he gets there.


munk
 
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