I'm not one to be critiquing, but I'm in the middle of building my 4th slipjoint.
Now this one I drew out my on plans, where as before I was going of plans that have worked for years.
The last drawing the spring pivot is way to close.
I'm only going by trial and error when I say that... Geometry I have found has everything to do with it.
The first one seems like it would work mechanically but I feel the spring is going to be way to thin.
I believe the tang is to big.
These are the opinions of a builder only in his 4th build of these.
Good luck on your work.