Looks better than some of my first ones.
I know a few makers who can go from grinder to putting a guard on with no hand finishing, but I'm not one of them. The way I do my convex edge is to flat grind it in at several angles and then blend together with a leather backed stick and sandpaper. You'd be surprised how quick you can change and correct minor grinding irregularities with sandpaper and a backing stick.
Think of grinding the bevels in with the grinder as roughing, then hand file to a fairly smooth, even bevel, then start with the sandpaper and a backing stick of some kind. I mostly use a 1 1/4" x 1/8" piece of 1084 bar stock, for rounding and blending convex edges it's a 3/4" hardwood strip with a leather cushion.
One other possibility is to try practice grinding on wooden slats. It's easier on your belts and wallet, and will help you figure out how to hold your hands and arms to get the angle you want.
Good luck and keep after it, it does get easier. And I have turned a few bowies into 3" hunters before too.