I'm going to preface my comments by saying that I have never built a linerlock. My actual experience building liner- (or frame-) locking folders is nil.
That being said, the first thing I noticed is the angle in the lock-bar cut. When force is applied to the lock, it should be directed straight down the lock bar... which to me means...
- Straighten out the lock bar cut. Being a liner-lock, it will be hidden by a scale anyway, so any aesthetic value that you get from the cut the way you show it will be hidden. Straightening the cut should strengthen the bar.
- Cut the lock face perpendicular to the direction you want the force directed down the lock bar.
I tweaked your sketch to show what I'm talking about.
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I also agree with Chuck, that the lock face seems a bit close to the pivot... but I can see where that came from considering you're trying to fit such a wide blade into a narrower handle.
It would be cool to hear more from the experienced guys on the stop/pivot/lock layout.
Erin