OK, now you are getting the idea. 100% improvement.
Notice how the top of the butt and the point are on the same plane?
Notice how the balance of the blade and the handle fit/
Notice how the "flow" of the knife from butt to tip is much more smooth?
All very good improvements.
Next group of suggestions:
Take the lip off the top of the handle butt. It will be VERY unfriendly to the hand.
Move the lanyard hole in more ( it is too close to the edge). Also, try drawing it down to the bottom of the butt. It may look better there.
Try drawing the knife without any dip in the spine. If you want it after the profile is cut out, you can add it later when finishing the blade. I used to put those dips in many knives, but now leave them off all but small hunter/skinners.
Try drawing the blade with the blade one less row of graph spaces narrower. This will line the edge up with the handle a bit better. It may or may not appeal to you more this way. Most first knives are quite wide, but as you learn to make them, you will make much narrower blade. The edge does the cutting. Most of the rest of the blade is there merely to support the edge. If used for heavy chopping, then more mass in the blade is good. If used for utility cutting and slicing, a thinner blade will be easier to use.
Final comment - try and smooth up the curve where the blade edge comes off the tip and goes into the bottom edge. Make it a tad fatter at the tip part, and the curve smooth and consistent as it goes back. Right now it is two intersecting planes, not a smooth curve.
I don't recall if you discussed the thickness, but 1/8" is a good thickness for a first knife of that size.