I need a critique........

mymindisamob

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really been working this image over, and over, and over...........

I need input, positive, negative, so on. All suggestions are welcome, not all will be taken, but I think you folks know I've been pushing for some t-shirt designs for awhile. This is a labor of lust and not for monetary gain. So fire away.:thumbup:
(Rat F., I am very hopeful of your input, and yes I know it's up for public discussion;))
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That is smokin' HOT bro. The War Boar is placed perfectly IMO. I really like it. T-Shirt? Hoodie? Hat? ???????

Again, just awesome.
 
I like the fog/steam/smoke in the background. It would look cool if it was being snorted out of his nose.
 
Some great suggestions! I'm taking notes for alternatives already! Keep 'em coming!
 
Friggen awesome ! But how about just the nuclear symbol with your INFI design under ?

I think the radioactive symbol looks awseome! I like the colors too.

I do agree with wayne37 though. I think the boar and type on top of the radioactive symbol is a little too busy. There is also a contrast problem around the letter M in Combat and the top of the F in INFI.
 
Mike,
You know I want that design in Huge on the back, in a smaller scale on the front and a Steel Heart on each sleeve.
I could have these made and available in Two Weeks if Jerry would give his blessing. These could be a Bladeforums special edition at no profit.
 
Mike,
You know I want that design in Huge on the back, in a smaller scale on the front and a Steel Heart on each sleeve.
I could have these made and available in Two Weeks if Jerry would give his blessing. These could be a Bladeforums special edition at no profit.

How about the Nuke symbol with "Busse Combat Knives" wrapped around it on the front in smller scale?
 
That may be your best work yet:eek:

I bet you've got a few more great ideas also. I really liked the last one I got from the BCS.
 
Ah, well since you asked. . . the radiation symbol, which I think works best with crisp hard edges- kind of looks soft and fuzzy with the rounded edges and flame effect.
 
Mike,
Just wondering if we could see a pic of this:

Go back to your first pic. Make the top of Busse Combat INFI horizontal, not parallelling the boar's back. Rather than pushing the smoke out to the sides, could we get a little more rise (vertical depth) in the smoke? I also agree with the contrast issue that someone posted above about.

I have no idea how hard it would be to do this and post a pic for those of us with poor imaginations, but IMHO, I think that might look a little better. Which is not to say that this doesn't already look awesome. It definitely looks great! :thumbup:
 
The concept is very good, and definitely has potential

The convergence of the foreground design with the background design is too visually confusing, and needs greater contrast between them.

Perhaps make the radiation symbol hard edged and then fade it, then put the war boar over it in a very saturated, complimentary color. Another option is to put the boar at the center of the radiation symbol, with no background behind it or immediately surrounding it. However, honestly, I think it would work best to make the two symbols non-overlapping.

An excellent start.
 
how about the nuclear symbol inside the hump area of the hog just above the busse.
 
i love that hog!! but i think the wb tooth takes away from its clean lines.

i like the radiation symbol as is, and think it would look less busy with the hog under instead of overlayed, and busse combat printed underneath.
 
Can you say 'Christmas Gift"?

I bet you can.

I like the way you say "Christnas Gift"!!!!
 
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