I need help with art for my car.

I agree, no one would decipher that easily.

Make the main lettering smaller
Use a clearer font. It will usually be seen moving and at a distance, so simpler is better.
Separate "JT Custom Knives" to make it clearer what it is you do.
Put ,in a simple font like Time New Roman, "JTcustomknives.com" on the lower door panel ( where the .com is now) perhaps in a light blue color.

Regardless of how elaborate the art work or how cute catch line is, it is the quick recognition and memorization of the web address that matters.

While I know the word "Bladesmith" gets argued a lot, ignoring semantics, your main selling item is your 2nd amendment knife, which is not forged. You are fairly new to the smithing end of this, and I think the term " Custom Knife Maker" or "Hand Made Knives" would convey your advertizing message more clearly to the public anyway.

Stacy

BTW, if you get a chance to send back those DVD's, I need them.

thanks stacy i will get the dvds back to you. i will also send you the fixed copy i made.
 
...if you do do this, Expect that your car may become a target for thievery...

...leave no tools or knives left visible, or they may go missing, along with some broken lock, or latch parts.
 
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