First, for etching damascus, you want 3:1 or even 5:1 diluted FC.
Some mixes of steels don't show a huge color contrast.
It is too late now, but the best way to get bright contrast is to etch until there is a bit of "topography" to the pattern. You can feel it easily with your fingernail. Then, after etching, boil the blade for about 20-30 minutes in water with a Tbs. of baking soda or TSP. Once dried, wrap a piece of 1000-2000 grit paper around a solid backer ) steel bar) and gently work the surface. It will brighten the high spots and make a sharp contrast against the dark low spots. Clean and oil well after sanding. Don't assemble a damascus blade handle until everything else is done.