Traditional Knife Haiku

Here you go Pinemoon - on one of the themes of the day :cool:

Full moon rises over pines
over flame, supper
new navaja purposeful

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Ray
It took me a week to find this fun thread - so here I offer one more -

Companion to all my gear
glinting steel compels
magic of a trusty knife


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These are cool variations on the haiku structure, Ray. :thumbsup::cool: Your syllable counts per line are 7-5-7, but the OP's requirement for conventional haiku have a 5-7-5 count! ;)

- GT
 
These are cool variations on the haiku structure, Ray. :thumbsup::cool: Your syllable counts per line are 7-5-7, but the OP's requirement for conventional haiku have a 5-7-5 count! ;)

- GT

Yeah, but I get a break as a dyslexic Frenchman :D who doesn't understand Japanese or Chinese. OOPS :confused:

They wouldn't have worked any other way. Poetic ain't they - nonetheless?
OK - I'll try to do better next time. ;)

Ray
 
I should add - I spent nearly all of the afternoon cooking up some cannabis tincture (medicine - really)
blending and mashing frozen cannabis buds with 200 proof alcohol then cooking off the alcohol. I was breathing fumes the entire time - otherwise as sober and straight as my Mother. She never ever drank alcohol - never even thought about drugs - even prescribed meds.

Can help to explain some of my haikukoo - don't you think ;)

Ray
 
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