The virtues of informed criticism

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Once upon a time there was some serious give and take, on this forum. I believe that it advanced the state of knife making art.
Alas, it was a bit too controversial for some and the forum has since slid into a banal coma, but enough of my mean spirited criticism!

Substitute the words "pipes and pipe smoking" with "knives and knife making". Read and hopefully enjoy the article below.

Your comments, thoughts and criticism are welcome.

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The Place of Criticism in Our Hobby by Christopher Stevens

Neill’s blog entry of October 14th, “Address to the Richmond CORPS Pipe Show: Crucible Moments,” sparked debate among A Passion for Pipes members. Views encouraging the idea that serious and sustained criticism of pipes and tobacco be given a more visible place in our hobby typically do. I believe it important that we understand why this is so. For only then will we be equipped to fairly judge arguments in favor of the idea.

I am a professional philosopher who has taught courses in the philosophy of art at the undergraduate and graduate levels for ten years on two continents. So I am intimately familiar with the issues Neill discusses in the post. They’re also close to my heart. This is not only because I’m a logician and relish the making of distinctions, but because pipes and pipe smoking matter to me.

There are some common misunderstandings that should be immediately done away with: (1) those in favor of reasoned criticism are necessarily elitist or anti-egalitarian; (2) aesthetic judgments are necessarily subjective; (3) there is no existing body of literature addressing these issues; (4) criticism kills a practice.

If one operates under the mistaken belief that (3) is true, he might well believe (1), (2), and (4). There is, however, a literature. It extends at least as far back as the 18th century with Immanuel Kant and David Hume, two philosophers central to the canon. There was a time when an education in the humanities would have been thought incomplete without one’s having read them. But due to the belief that education per the canon is oppressive because it is critical, today’s student is instead lucky to come across them. Both were concerned to show that aesthetic judgments can be objective. Hume in particular was concerned with the role of critics in understanding what objectivity in aesthetic judgment amounts to.

So, tragically, a failure to give criticism its due role in education, i.e. a specific failure, leads to a widespread failure to understand the role of criticism generally. And this has political ramifications. Many believe that criticism, because it supposedly cannot be based on objectively true claims, and because it supposedly merely parades as objective, is oppressive and elitist. One point is this: even with respect to education, failure to give criticism its due place undermines the very practice.

Criticism doesn’t kill education; it is integral to it. The poet and cultural critic T.S. Eliot famously claimed that the maintenance of a tradition requires continual critique of it. Surprisingly, critique doesn’t undermine but imparts stability. A group whose members are devoted to excellence becomes a brotherhood. We are, I would have thought, brothers of the briar.

Kant and Hume were concerned to resolve an inconsistency between two intuitions, both of which many of us have, and which pull in opposite directions: the intuition that there may be something to the multitude of differing aesthetic judgments we encounter in discussion with others, and our inclination to believe that some works are objectively better than others. An inference is often made from the fact of widespread differences in judgment to the claim that aesthetic judgments are subjective. That is a non-sequitur. Difference of opinion does not imply that there’s no fact of the matter. Two scientists may disagree prior to strong confirmatory evidence, but this doesn’t imply that both are correct, or neither is, or one is. Disagreement can coexist with unknown fact.

The point of reasoned disagreement is to eventually arrive, together, at agreement as to what is most reasonably believed to be the truth. Reasoned disagreement is, in that sense, one mark of what it means to be civilized. A civil society, even a small one like our pipe community, if robbed of the capacity for its members to engage in well-intended argument, risks the integrity of the society. This is because human beings have a natural inclination to seek excellence with respect to what they care about, we are social creatures, and we therefore naturally also seek the company of others with similar cares in an effort to determine the marks of the excellent through reasoned and, yes, critical dialogue.

But some whom we count as friends in the hobby unfortunately believe the critical attitude to involve intolerance. A popular subjectivist strategy, in fact, involves an inference from the value of tolerance to what is supposedly required for it, namely subjectivism about other kinds of values, aesthetic or otherwise. But that is a non-sequitur, since one can be tolerant without being a subjectivist. That is, there are plenty of tolerant, respectful, and friendly folks with strong opinions about some subject matter. They may care enough about the subject matter to have worked through reasons for and against some particular view about it. The desire to want to share these reasons with others having similar interests is a natural one. In sharing our views and the reasons we believe them true, we further both understanding and the hobby itself.

We are lucky to live in a golden age of artisan pipe making and tobacco blending. If we’re to make the most of what we’ve been given, we’ll repay those artisans by engaging in a critical dialogue, complete with reasons for any verdict offered, so as to recognize their talents and progress and continued excellence. Gratitude would ask this of us.
 
we could use a lot more 'reasoned disagreement' here, and elsewhere.
 
So it's not all about "Atta Boy's" and back slapping? :D


The most travelled knife forums today all seem to suffer from "If you don't like it keep it to yourself" syndrome. It was particularly discouraging to see on one of the forums, when a poster asked "Which knife brand NOT to buy?" a moderator actually edited comments out of several posts and stated:

"As a super Moderator here and as a Knifemaker I would like to try to confine this to Brands that we Would Recommend and not engage in any Bad Mouthing of any knife companies.

I am going to edit the posts above to reflect this goal."



Wow...just wow.


-Michael
 
So it's not all about "Atta Boy's" and back slapping? :D


The most travelled knife forums today all seem to suffer from "If you don't like it keep it to yourself" syndrome. It was particularly discouraging to see on one of the forums, when a poster asked "Which knife brand NOT to buy?" a moderator actually edited comments out of several posts and stated:

"As a super Moderator here and as a Knifemaker I would like to try to confine this to Brands that we Would Recommend and not engage in any Bad Mouthing of any knife companies.

I am going to edit the posts above to reflect this goal."



Wow...just wow.


-Michael

I encountered a similar situation on a forum I now frequent much less than before. A "super-moderator" responded to a three-year-old thread, in which I had last posted, then after one exchange of a non-challenging nature, chose to close the thread because "As I feel everyone has had a chance to voice their opinion, I will close this thread." Which kinda left little room for further discussion, haha.

I felt the same way as you

Wow - just wow.

Great thread, Peter, stem to stern. I thoroughly enjoyed all the give and take of opinion and enlightened disagreement. Too bad we don't see the atmosphere of many forums allowing it much.
 
There's reasoned disagreement
and then theres opinionated disagreement.

A forum is what the posters make of it.
I don't feel that the problem lies so much in the criticisms/disagreements themselves.
It likely lies in how these criticisms/disagreements are voiced and the tenor of the postings themselves.
Anyone can be a critic. Anyone can feel themselves important enough to criticize others.
Until tactfulness and compassionate discourse are mastered, until the critic can post his critiques in a manner which encourages instead of tearing down of anothers efforts, no matter how right the critic may be his postings serve less to benefit the community than to himself.

At any rate...
We can discuss this topic as it pertains to this forum...
Or we can bring in other forums,supermoderator actions and I can move this to Tech support where it would then belong.
If anyone has a problem with a moderator or how this site is moderated the proper place for posting such a thread is in the Tech Support forum.
 
or it could be that many people feel it's just safer to stick with the atta boy's......due to many reasons.......

-Michael
 
or it could be that many people feel it's just safer to stick with the atta boy's......due to many reasons.......

-Michael

That would be their choice
If "atta boys" are all the effort they are willing to put into a critique, then perhaps that's all they should give.
The forum should be a place for all custom knifemakers to post. Not a select few knifemakers deemed worthy by a few members whom call this forum their home despite there being a several other places where custom knifemaking is discussed on this site.
Critiques should be honest and forthright, but also have regard and compassion for the poster and the efforts. They should be done by the forum as a whole in an earnest manner to teach and encourage.
 
That would be their choice
If "atta boys" are all the effort they are willing to put into a critique, then perhaps that's all they should give.
The forum should be a place for all custom knifemakers to post. Not a select few knifemakers deemed worthy by a few members whom call this forum their home despite there being a several other places where custom knifemaking is discussed on this site.
Critiques should be honest and forthright, but also have regard and compassion for the poster and the efforts. They should be done by the forum as a whole in an earnest manner to teach and encourage.

Couldn't agree more!
 
I believe the proper term is constructive criticism.

When I am asked to review a newer makers knives. I find its best to suggest that,
"On the next one, try Blah Blah,, I think you will find a improvement in Blah Blah.
That is the polite and correct way to suggest something and the way I myself warmly receive constructive criticism.

Also one thing that many seem to forget is that I can like or do something one way while you like or do something another and both of use can be right!
 
I am thinking that people giving constructive criticism should do so in the same manner as they would in person.
Too many times people post things online that they wouldn't dare to say in person.
or.....they would get punched in the nose.
I say be honest as well as polite and constructive with any criticism.
 
I am thinking that people giving constructive criticism should do so in the same manner as they would in person.
Too many times people post things online that they wouldn't dare to say in person.
or.....they would get punched in the nose.
I say be honest as well as polite and constructive with any criticism.


The absolute truth by a mile.


-Michael
 
I'm one of the few members of this forum who gives sincere critique when I have the time, and almost every time I've done it, it's been received as intended. One or two times, not so much, but generally the craftsman and artists here appreciate thoughtful critique. I've crossed paths with some who don't , and generally I don't comment on their threads at all.

The thing that bothers me the most about this particular topic, is that the members of the forum who have the experience and ability to convey critical thoughts about knives effectively, are often the same ones who gripe about how 'the good ole days' of the forum and all the constructive criticism that used to happen here is mysteriously gone.

You guys almost never add one iota of the quality you feel is so sorely lacking, and fall back on the 'if you don't have something nice to say..." almost every time. I don't get it- if you want this place to be different why is it that you think that complaining is going to help more than actually doing something differently?

'Be the change you want to see in the world' is the phrase comes to my mind. The attaboy crowd, (which I have no problem with, as I often am one of them) is always going to be here. It's up to you guys to weigh in with your own comments. As the population of this forum increases, it will be up to the more seasoned forumites to set an example of what they feel this forum should be, if indeed they feel this forum should be a particular way. Crying about it doesn't do anyone any good.

In my view the only people who can change the environment here are the same ones who complain about it.
 
You guys almost never add one iota of the quality you feel is so sorely lacking, and fall back on the 'if you don't have something nice to say..." almost every time. I don't get it- if you want this place to be different why is it that you think that complaining is going to help more than actually doing something differently?

You have stated this same complaint in similar threads, who are these "guys"?
 
I am thinking that people giving constructive criticism should do so in the same manner as they would in person.
Too many times people post things online that they wouldn't dare to say in person.
or.....they would get punched in the nose.
I say be honest as well as polite and constructive with any criticism.


Very well said Mark!
 
I am thinking that people giving constructive criticism should do so in the same manner as they would in person.
Too many times people post things online that they wouldn't dare to say in person.
or.....they would get punched in the nose.
I say be honest as well as polite and constructive with any criticism.

I think this to is the best way

Problem is like in many of the arts being critiqued the critic is a failed artist so it always comes across bitter :)
 
I think most knifemakers are more than happy to be critiqued as long as it's done with consideration to the piece as well as the maker.
As long as their effort is recognized and a critique is delivered in a politely respectful, non-confrontational, non-demeaning manner most would be more than happy to discuss both the good and bad aspects or (perceptions thereof) of their hard work. But...Just because a thread is posted does not automatically invite an open critique by anyone. Sometimes a maker might like to just show a knife.
 
Anytime a maker posts his work on the internet he or she is opening up themselves to comments

You must expect the bad with the good

The Internet because it is not face to face promotes rudeness....... it is that plain and simple

I choose not to comment negatively on people's work in most cases unless they make a silly statement that I just can't resist :)
 
You have stated this same complaint in similar threads, who are these "guys"?

the same ones who bemoan the lack of critique without ever offering any themselves. Usually they jump on the 'back in the good ole days' bandwagon every time this topic comes up.

Now, with that being said, I consider most of them friends, so I won't point any fingers :)
 
Anytime a maker posts his work on the internet he or she is opening up themselves to comments

You must expect the bad with the good

The Internet because it is not face to face promotes rudeness....... it is that plain and simple

I choose not to comment negatively on people's work in most cases unless they make a silly statement that I just can't resist :)

Commentary? possibly. Being criticized in public. No not really.
Even then, any commentary should be well thought and presented in a polite manner.
Also would be a good idea to ask if the knifemaker wishes the criticism or not.
Politeness is a wonderful thing sometimes.
 
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