Here is one problem with the verbiage I see in ads all the time. This is an excerpt from an actual sales thread here, bear in mind don't go and start any crap with the seller, or there will be repercussions. I am in no way "picking" on anyone, but I see so many sales threads every day that some of this stuff is just insane. In order to provide some context, the sale is for multiple high dollar items. here is the clip.
-Buy more than one, $10 off the second
-Gifted or +3%
-First "I'll take it" gets it
-I've got the right to refuse to do business, blah blah
-Insurance is on you, once I drop it off at the post office I am no longer liable.
-By buying an knife you are agreeing to these terms
Here is what I see as grossly wrong:
-Gifted or +3%
Really? You want me to give up all my buyers protection to save you a few bucks? Hell no! Why not look up what "gift" means and try again?
Can't you add the 3% and just list a price? Yet you are willing to subtract $10 after I buy 2 or more items? Does that mean I get my fees back that you should have paid in the first place or is that a bonus? It gets confusing for no damn good reason at all. This is just not a necessary thing to do, ever.
-Insurance is on you, once I drop it off at the post office I am no longer liable.
Actually, you are liable 100% for that package not arriving to it's intended destination. Need proof? Ask Paypal. They will set you straight 110% on what the extent of your liability is. If I buy an item and it does not arrived packaged well, and to my door in the condition you sold it to me as, we are going to have some problems, I can guarantee you that much. I consider this attitude a huge problem when dealing with people. Some may call it a "red flag", whatever you call it, it does not convey a "I want you to be happy with your purchase" sentiment at all. What it does convey is a "good luck you are on your own" attitude. Also some people do not understand the purpose of insurance. If you sell an item and it fails to arrive at its destination that insurance money goes towards making the buyer whole. You eat the loss for failure to ship properly, or with adequate packaging, postage, etc. Again, need proof, ask the folks that manage the post offices in your area.
-I've got the right to refuse to do business, blah blah
While this is true, the way it is stated seems a bit overbearing. I don't think I am being hypersensitive here, but why not word it a bit better and say:
I have the right to refuse a sale to (insert your reason here and include why).
That will convey a solid reasoning for that comment and give the buyers a better understanding of their position. It just sounds jerky as is.
-By buying an knife you are agreeing to these terms
No. The terms are dictated by the shipper, the forums where the deal took place, and the service used to pay for the items. Rules from the "land of make believe" have no influence in real life transactions.
This doesn't even begin to scratch the surface of identifying the condition accurately of an item.