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That poem seems like a waist of a great vocabulary.
Here is my shortened version....
Bat and cat rhyme with hat, fat, rat,
dermatologist porcupine pat mat sat,
car truck doe buck.... equator duck.
Permissible plausible possible luck.
Big word, big word, big word, - F@*K!!!
Makes a lot of sense right?
If i knew what all those words meant, or how they sound when pronounced correctly.... If that was my vocabulary above.... i could of taken that and turned it into a poem with an actual story. Something "funner" to read anyways.... That one just hurts my head... Granted im not the most edumacted either.... So maybe i just dont get it....
2 weeks and a wake up.
Here is my shortened version....
Bat and cat rhyme with hat, fat, rat,
dermatologist porcupine pat mat sat,
car truck doe buck.... equator duck.
Permissible plausible possible luck.
Big word, big word, big word, - F@*K!!!
Makes a lot of sense right?

If i knew what all those words meant, or how they sound when pronounced correctly.... If that was my vocabulary above.... i could of taken that and turned it into a poem with an actual story. Something "funner" to read anyways.... That one just hurts my head... Granted im not the most edumacted either.... So maybe i just dont get it....
2 weeks and a wake up.